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Reviews for A Faithful Mistress
| VeelaChick |
12/02/05 - 12:44PM |
1: [One-shot] |
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| OH MY GOD that was excellent! i loved every moment please write another chapter i just loved it so much, i think the bits with tom were great!!!!! |
| Amaya |
11/20/05 - 05:12PM |
1: [One-shot] |
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| I am immensely interested in this! Bellatrix is an interesting character, with so much to develop and the fact that she's always found herself to be the favorite of Lord Voldemort has interested me. A wonderful write! |
| Struggling |
11/14/05 - 12:50PM |
1: [One-shot] |
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| I like this a lot. With Bellatrix there is so much we don't know about her, so there's a lot you can write about. I never took a moment to picture her wedding day, it's interesting to see how you picture it. And the Tom bit was great. The only improvement I can suggest is fixing some of the more awkward sentences. Overall, a great one-shot. |
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