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Reviews for a day in the life of Draco Malfoy.
| Amaya |
12/12/05 - 12:13PM |
1: Borgin and Burkes |
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A very good story, Veela. I do enjoy reading your works and I hope to read a bit more! Only one notation and I do hope you won't take offense to this, I apologize if you do. At the end, you mentioned Draco was heading home to meet mother and father, but earlier spoke of Lucius being in Azkaban. Everything else was brilliant and a really well detailed story!!
Author's Response: thankyou again for reviewing! i've changed the bit at the bottom of my story now, i didn't realise that i had done that, and of course i would never take offence. i am willing to accept any critism that will make my stories better. thanks again Amaya. |
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