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Reviews for A Rose By Any Other Name
| Struggling |
03/10/06 - 11:01AM |
1: Prologue and Chapter One - I Do Bite My Thumb, Sir |
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Jackie, I like this story a lot. Some of the sentences are a bit awkward to read, but I think that has more to do with you trying to make it more like "old English". It works! The risk you take with doing a Romeo/Juliet spin-off is that it's quite predictable to really anyone who breaths. Still, I like it. Very well written. A very enjoyable read.
Author's Response: That is why later on there will be some fun scenes that did NOT happen in R + J. This makes things FAR more exciting... |
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