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Reviews for A Million Tears
| blooh |
08/15/05 - 06:33PM |
2: The Fight... |
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| hey im not to big of a fan of maraude's FF but i like this one plz post more soon |
| Struggling |
08/04/05 - 12:10PM |
1: The Suspicions... |
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| Hey Em. This is a good start so far. Sorry, haven't gotten to the next chapter yet. My suggestion for this chapter is that you should shy away from every day language. A lot of the words you choose are words you would use in speaking only. When you're writing a piece, however, try and use professional, more formal words. It'll add a higher quality to your ff. |
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